Tuesday, April 19, 2005

Recess Files...conted...

another sumthing i wrote... :)
Waiting for the release…
From the realness of you and the absurdity of me…
Waiting to be led…
Into the depths of you and the abyss of me…
Waiting to feel…
The closeness of you and the pain of me…
Waiting…
For you, no longer for me.

6 Comments:

Blogger Ozair said...

u know it isnt that hard to leave comments... select anonymous if ur not a blogger...!! :)

12:20 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

wooziee woozieee woozieee woozieee

10:52 PM  
Blogger Ozair said...

wot sorta comment is this..zee!! hahaha... !! and i know its u! :)

10:58 PM  
Blogger Natasha said...

this one is really nice .. you write well .. keep it up :) .. happy now??? that someone has left a comment .. :)

11:02 AM  
Blogger Phitaymaun said...

DUDE. This is brilliant, gave me goose bumps!!! I hope u scroll down on your blog hunting for comments cuz i'd to have this go unnoticed. BUt seriously, you have the magic... i wud say quit medicine and lets team up to make the best damn feature film ever conceived in Lollywood.
But seriously WOW! Its been a looooooooooon time since an amayeur poem has earned max points on my goose bump scale. Keep it up and keep em coming.

1:55 AM  
Blogger Ozair said...

u are way too kind yaar!! :) and as for the movie!! hmmm... i dont know... maybe!! :)

6:29 AM  

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